Betrayal

I feel disgust
My bones begin to rust
Anger boils my blood
As thick and heavy as mud
There's no turning back
I'm turning into a maniac
Betrayal of kinship
I've got to get a grip
Promises broken
Lies only spoken
What's going on here?
The truth is so near
A slap in the face
Please give me my space
A loss of closeness
Words can not express
Selfish ways
No more happy days
Cursed for all eternity
No one feels pity
Lost hurt dead
Not a word is said

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  1. AnonymousApril 15, 2010 at 12:16 AM

    Please give me my space
    A loss of closeness
    Words can not express
    I feel disgust
    My bones begin to rust
    Anger boils my blood
    As think, thoughts heavy as mud
    I'm turning into a maniac
    Betrayal of kinship
    I've got to get a grip
    Promises broken
    Lies only spoken
    What's going on here?
    The truth is so near
    A slap in the face
    Please give me my space
    A loss of closeness
    Words can not express
    Selfish ways
    No more happy days
    Cursed for all eternity
    No one feels pity
    Lost hurt dead
    Not a word is said

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  2. UchukitiApril 17, 2010 at 8:25 PM

    Thank you for your help...but if you notice every two lines rhyme with each other. I did have a typo that I fixed with your help: think = thick. Hopefully I will post some new stuff soon!

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  3. Miyo SiaAugust 9, 2010 at 3:49 AM

    you got raw talent girl :)

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  4. UchukitiAugust 18, 2010 at 1:54 PM

    thank you...i plan to post something tonight or tomorrow :)

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